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She walks this underpass
embalmed with the graffiti
of the broken, the glass
bottles blue and broke
on cigarette dirt -
where she disinters
glints of rusting rails,
the steel line parallels
of a western yesterday
and gold melded dust.

Although nonplussed by
this tunnel's twilight eye,
this lying catacomb echo
of a locomotive ghost,
she must get out, escape,
breathe California magnolias,
and leave her solastalgia ache
to a west wind,
a golden state.

But it's all she feels,
this millstone of loneliness
chained to the selfsame shame
that came with breaking
her mother's sidewalk spine,
the crab leg line of bone
beneath her very own skin.

So she tarries in here
with this cemetery sickness
searching for the solace
of a nomadic ballad
that only the broken hear.

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:iconrant-lover:
rant-lover Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
pure amazing 
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ersatz-moon Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what is the third dimension?
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thirdim3nsion Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
thanks for the fav.

the third dimension is kind of a long rabbit hole of story...
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:iconersatz-moon:
ersatz-moon Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well i'm interested to hear it, if you're interested to tell it.
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nataroque Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Only here for three months and already you've made an impact. Quite brilliant. I really love your words~
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thirdim3nsion Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
thank you for your kind words.
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:iconthirdim3nsion:
thirdim3nsion Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
thank you. so kind.
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Beautiful work! :heart:
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:iconthirdim3nsion:
thirdim3nsion Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
thank you.
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:iconautumnlit:
autumnlit Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
You're welcome! ^^
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